As the crowd quietens down the red curtains go up, all the parents look like they want a great performance.
The show starts with clear and great acting from the great characters.
I feel as nervous as a mouse about to get killed by a cat.
All the characters were very good but Ej would be the best, because of his great expression.
As room sixes act started I thought “oh god!” but I still managed to do it.
The crowd cheered like someone winning $100,000.
I felt relieved as I walked off stage.
When the production came to an end we all sang lean on me lyrics, we all sang as loud as a whistle.
I thought that the Myross Bush production 2010 was great.
By Ben C
1 comment:
Ben, I really enjoyed reading your descriptive writing. I loved the way you compared your nervousness to a mouse! I could really picture this in my head.
Keep up the great writing. I can't wait to read more soon!
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