Monday, November 15, 2010

Summer poem

SUMMER

Summer sun shine shines over the beach, the hot sun shine makes reflections on the water. The sun is as hot as the sun, heat scorches us like we’re meat pattes. I’m as hot as lava. We see the wind whipping against us, we feel it, I taste the salt water as I dive in CRASH! BOOM! I hear the people yell as I relax. JAWS!!!!!!!!!!! I smell blood I I I see the shark coming closer and closer aaaaaaaaaaaa.

1 comment:

Da Reddings said...

Hey Oscar Coolpoem and very descriptive.